What is your idea of a perfect day?
Describe some places, people, or objects that contribute to an enjoyable 24 hours.
There are three things which I need in my perfect day.
:that or which:that is more spesific
which si used when I want to add imformation
I want music session, meditation, and peace world in my perfect day.
:peace is noun so * world peace :in > on :more specific
I will show the reason why I need these things for my perfect day.
:show > explain or tell:
First, I am always dreaming to do music session with new people who like music.
:First > Firstly: dreaming > hoping or eagar:sessions:
The reason why is that I like to share feelings with othres.
:the reason is that music sessions arrow me to share feeli....
As Music don't require any languages, so I can share feelings with a lot of people through music regardless what language we can speak.
:never start with as:
Then I need large space and many people who like music.
:I would need large space and peope who like music.
Off course we need some instruments,but if people do music without instruments like singing or dancing,we don't need them.
:we wouldn't need some instruments however if people do music by singing or dancing they are welcom as well.
Second,I want to do meditation at biggining and endding of perfect day.
:secondly:to maditate at the stayt and the end of
I like meditation very much because I like being calm and thinking something.
Being calm and thinkling well is always important fpr me because we can't do anything well and enjoy without them.
:we cant make good decition without
I do meditaion after getting up and before going to bed everyday.
So if I have a lot of time , I want to do meditation in even my perfect day.
So in my even my perfect day I will still meditate
Then I need a quiet place for meditaion because I want to concentrate meditaion without annoying.
:never start with as and then.
Also,I eagar to peace full world because I can't enjoy if there is a war in the world.
If there are wars,that day must not be perfect day because I think ones really happy life doesn't be on others bad life.
I hope the world that everyone are happy.
:I hope for a world where everyone is happy.
And I want to feel that kind of world with joy.
:I want to enjoy linving in that kind if the world.
I think that feeling must be really good.
So my plan of perfect day is that I will do meditation for an hour first.
And I will enjoy thinking in the peace full world.
After meditation,I will enjoy music with people who like music and share our feelings.
After that ,I will do meditaion with thinking and feeling world peace.
And I will go to sleep with thanking for everything.
It's my perfect day that couldn't be better than anymore.
: this is my perfecr day and it doesn't get any better that that